Ok, this is some awesome feedback - thank you so, so much!! I hate Zach quite a bit in this chapter, but it's totally based on how I act when I'm caught out - I blame everyone but myself!
I like them as a partnership - they can look after each other, not just one of them is weak and the other is strong all the time, I hope that came out in this chapter :)
I'm frantically typing away in Word, after a bit of writer's block I'm cracking on, so I should have more for you fairly soon. Thanks again for commenting, makes my day!
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on 2008-09-13 09:02 pm (UTC)I like them as a partnership - they can look after each other, not just one of them is weak and the other is strong all the time, I hope that came out in this chapter :)
I'm frantically typing away in Word, after a bit of writer's block I'm cracking on, so I should have more for you fairly soon. Thanks again for commenting, makes my day!